joejohnstun
New member
High! My second HomeRecording song.
This one is a bona fide demo with not a shred of pretentions toward being an actual song yet. This song kept me awake the other night, so I wrote it down and still liked it the next morning. I slapped together one guitar, one vocal, and a few claps so I could show you its bare bones.
I wanted to get some feedback on those bones (structure, lyrics, melody, length, gimmicks) before it fully settled onto my DAW.
Also, if you have any ideas about things you think would sound nice in the final product, I would be much obliged.
Thank you!
https://soundcloud.com/joejohnstun/if-i-had-a-pair-of-you
If I Had a Pair of You
If I had a pair of you I wouldn't know which one to choose
Cuz I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough
So I'd buy you both mismatching shoes and I'd take you on a swinger's cruise
Cuz I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough of you
They said one of you's enough and three's a crowd and two's too much
But I'm unlucky and one and two and love
So I'll double my chances to sweep you off
And I can never ever get.. get enough of you
If I had two of you the same
I'd give you both silly nicknames, call one of you Mary, the other one Jane
Cuz I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough
I'd roll you up in pretty paper I'd smoke one now and save one for later
I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough of you
If I had a pair of you I wouldn't know which one to choose
Cuz I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough
And if you two made my wish come true, I'd only wish for one more you
Cuz I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough and
I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough of you
She said one of me's enough and three's a crowd and two's too much
But I'm unlucky in lust and too and love
So I'll double my chances to sweep you off
And I can never ever get.. get enough of you
If I had a pair of you I'd let you both have other me's too
Because I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough and
I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough of you
This one is a bona fide demo with not a shred of pretentions toward being an actual song yet. This song kept me awake the other night, so I wrote it down and still liked it the next morning. I slapped together one guitar, one vocal, and a few claps so I could show you its bare bones.
I wanted to get some feedback on those bones (structure, lyrics, melody, length, gimmicks) before it fully settled onto my DAW.
Also, if you have any ideas about things you think would sound nice in the final product, I would be much obliged.
Thank you!
https://soundcloud.com/joejohnstun/if-i-had-a-pair-of-you
If I Had a Pair of You
If I had a pair of you I wouldn't know which one to choose
Cuz I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough
So I'd buy you both mismatching shoes and I'd take you on a swinger's cruise
Cuz I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough of you
They said one of you's enough and three's a crowd and two's too much
But I'm unlucky and one and two and love
So I'll double my chances to sweep you off
And I can never ever get.. get enough of you
If I had two of you the same
I'd give you both silly nicknames, call one of you Mary, the other one Jane
Cuz I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough
I'd roll you up in pretty paper I'd smoke one now and save one for later
I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough of you
If I had a pair of you I wouldn't know which one to choose
Cuz I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough
And if you two made my wish come true, I'd only wish for one more you
Cuz I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough and
I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough of you
She said one of me's enough and three's a crowd and two's too much
But I'm unlucky in lust and too and love
So I'll double my chances to sweep you off
And I can never ever get.. get enough of you
If I had a pair of you I'd let you both have other me's too
Because I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough and
I can't get enough of you, I can't get enough of you