i said i was gone post

Not feelin this at all. Were you high when you did this man?

Compared to hell yeah and maybe kick, this ain't shit. Your sound needs a tweak to give you more presence and make it fit with the beats you're using.
 
hmmm,,you like those better?

i did kick like a year ago,and hell yeah was cool

i'm developing a new flow and writing style on this one
and performance wise,,i go back to "what it is"
over alot of others iv'e done,,,i have alot of kick's and hell yeahs,,but only one like "what it is"

i know about my sound,,,and iv'e been wanting to know
how to fit my voice in a mix better,,,any help on that would be cool




thanx for the feed
 
Im not big on giving feedback on songs done on instrumentals that have been used by major artist..cause on the real you are actually following their technique...

I need to hear you and your style on something original that is yours.. a beat created for you.. I think you have a pretty nice flow..and you need original beats to esp. your own style..

Mixtapes verses don't explain alot to me..other then you can follow a format that has already been used and tested..
 
tru

true,true

i feel you on that homey

i see used beat like an exhibition
it's more to see what will happen
not to prove,or to recreate
if you listen to the original,,
my flow, in no way, mirrors any of the rappers on that song
i really went another direction with it
the beat itself created that flow,,,not me


thanx foe the feed

and im working on the album so i got my on shit
and will post some soon,,but right now i'm mixxx tape mania

hustlemiest
 
don't get me wrong..i like your style.. just like hearing original music...

let us know when you get your stuff up
 

Well I cant really give to much feedback b/c u used anotha person's beat but i understand since its a mixtape track. Flow is a lil sloppy. U dont seem to be interested at all. Its like u jus spit to be sptting. Not knocking u but i mean i think more energy could be in it. But its ok for wat it is. I give u a 5/10.

Nicole
 
alrighty

ok

yeah i heard that before about the energy
i'm working on that and i'm growing as i go
but that was a new flow for me
since i don't have my songs done yet
i'll post one more mixtape song soon
after that hopefully yawl can critque something original
i have songs i did on ansane and vtz beats
but i won't post them tho

thanx foe the feed
 

I havent been on here in a hot minute but u just rap or you make beats also but just havent posted or finished them? Just curious babes.

Nicole

 
don't make beats ma.
only rap,but i can make a beat, sample, and all that
but check out these other two songs,,one is mixtape "original regs"
the other "hypothetical" is produced by ansane one of their free beats
from this summer.
 
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