Irwin abrigo
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I am hoping this song I've written and produce is pleasing to you guys, if not I would like to know has to which directions I can take to make this song a better sounding song over all especially the phrase "I don't want your" I put into the first verse and the choruses, doesn't work for you guys?
I Don't Want Your Number by Freshairsongs | Free Listening on SoundCloud
I Don’t Want Your Number
©2020 Irwin Abrigo
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You give me your number
asked me to call you
My troubles on your shoulders
Worries in your pocket
I needed a lover
someone who will always be there
We’re bridging into each other
Weather in the night or in the day
But when I called your number
there was a woman on the line
Who claims to be your wife
she kelp talking the whole time
I can hear you in the background
pretending to be cool
With Lots and lots of denials
she said you took her for a fool
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(Chorus)x2
I don't want your number, anymore
I’m throwing it through the window don’t come knocking at my door
-
(Verse 2)
You told her you're merry
you’re not devoted
That's what I hear her saying
the vole has been broken
I heard you were talking
saying this house is our home
Your voices were getting stronger
Louder as I listen on the phone
-
(Chorus)x2
I don't want your number
anymore
Throwing it through the window don’t come knocking
at my door
-
(Bridge)
You lied to me
you lied to me
You said you were alone
you had nobody
You lied to me
you lied to me
You said you were lonely
you were lonely like me
-
(Chorus)
I Don't Want Your Number by Freshairsongs | Free Listening on SoundCloud
I Don’t Want Your Number
©2020 Irwin Abrigo
-
You give me your number
asked me to call you
My troubles on your shoulders
Worries in your pocket
I needed a lover
someone who will always be there
We’re bridging into each other
Weather in the night or in the day
But when I called your number
there was a woman on the line
Who claims to be your wife
she kelp talking the whole time
I can hear you in the background
pretending to be cool
With Lots and lots of denials
she said you took her for a fool
-
(Chorus)x2
I don't want your number, anymore
I’m throwing it through the window don’t come knocking at my door
-
(Verse 2)
You told her you're merry
you’re not devoted
That's what I hear her saying
the vole has been broken
I heard you were talking
saying this house is our home
Your voices were getting stronger
Louder as I listen on the phone
-
(Chorus)x2
I don't want your number
anymore
Throwing it through the window don’t come knocking
at my door
-
(Bridge)
You lied to me
you lied to me
You said you were alone
you had nobody
You lied to me
you lied to me
You said you were lonely
you were lonely like me
-
(Chorus)