Bruthish
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Sorry Irwin I am with most everyone else. I don't get it either. For one, you have two versions posted and they are totally two different songs...then the female singer.....sounds like she is a good singer but then her voice is warped all of the place from a pitch corrector. Is she just a sample or is this someone you know that actually sang this for you? If you do not know her and you just got her off the internet then this means that the song isn't "yours".
I think your best best is to find someone who is willing to take the time to go through your midi file and clean it all up and send it back for you to add vocals over(your own vocals or someone you know). If your a "songwriter" but not a "musician", then let someone else have that burden or take time to learn an instrument. Right now the music part is a mess...and I am not trying to bring you down at all. We all have had to start somewhere and we are all still learning.
Good luck
I think your best best is to find someone who is willing to take the time to go through your midi file and clean it all up and send it back for you to add vocals over(your own vocals or someone you know). If your a "songwriter" but not a "musician", then let someone else have that burden or take time to learn an instrument. Right now the music part is a mess...and I am not trying to bring you down at all. We all have had to start somewhere and we are all still learning.
Good luck