Sounds great to me, just as some of the other guys say, the drums could do with being a good bit louder. i think this would add the oomph thats currently missing a little. Perhaps a bit more around 400hz on the bass would thicken it a little, its a little scooped for my taste.
Good work.
Ok just listened to the second mix, it sounds bang on, drums and guitars are great! I'm still hearing the slightly empty bass, a little boost might help it in the mid - lower mid. Thats just looking for something to criticise though, it sounds really good overall.