Like Gerg said, put some instruments to it. That's gonna tell ya more about how it really sounds.
I think I'd mix up a different take too. Put some rolls in there, rides, crashes etc to see (hear) your stereo spread, phase issues (if any) etc.
It's a good start. The crash is a little 'much'. If you're using an overhead, move it back a bit. The kick sounds nice. The snare is OK, too, maybe a little 'sloppy' for me, but I'm no judge on what's good or not good. Overall? A good start. It sounds like a drum kit rolleyes, and it sounds like you're ready for some guitar and bass.