How should I go about this?

[clayfeet]

Hei. I'm just starting to dwell into mixing; so far the only thing I know is that I pretty much don't know anything. I guess this track is evidence, so it'd be great if you could let me know what you think is wrong with it. Cheers.

http://www.box.net/shared/r555bsupp6

 

[commanda]

Since it's been a day & nobody else more qualified than myself has commented, I'll comment.

A lot of the drums sound like a wooden block. Especially at the start.
Vocals sound like it was tracked at 3am & you were afraid of disturbing the neighbours.

Song itself seems pretty good. Good use of dynamics.

 

[clayfeet]

commanda- thanks for this; anyone else...?

 

[Bulls Hit]

Sounds good to me. I like the vocals and backing vox. I'm listening on crappy speakers but nothing stands out as needing attention. You've kept it simple which is good. I like it, good tune