Help on this track!

It all sounds totally off beat as far as the lyric to beat ratio! (IMO)
Plus I can't hear what you are saying lyrically, it is rather muffled.........
 
yeah i was trying something new.....going fast but yeah i basically messing around trying to get a perfect sound on it then imma put it seriously onto work...but i need help with it.
 
nah that beat would be good if you can get a rapper that can rip on it..if not then you should spice it up a lil..i dunno with what..i dont make beats haha but its a good beat for lyrical shit and an empty beat for material shit
 
Flow just doesn't fit this at all, fam.

Me, I could kill this beat with the Rapid Fire flow... cuz that's what I do. You... you can't seem to pull it off.

I'd either do it over, or just let someone else rip it.
 
Yeh im deff diggin the beat its reael tight. But the vocals, like everyone else said, does seem to fit it very well. For one i cant really understand em/hear em. Maybe try re-recording and turning them up a little?
 
If you guys wanna give me an example of how you guys would rap on this beat then go ahead and download it and send it to me. Im alwayz ready to learn a few new things.
 
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