I think you got the vocal level spot on with this one, but, I think you know what I'm going to say, I can't dig the doubled vocal. You know me, I'm not a fan of it at all. Yet, I think it works really well during the chorus. So maybe don't use it during the verse and throw it in there during the chorus.
One of the reasons I don't see it working with this one is because all the other tracks are fairly dry and up close, the vocal is the only track with a delayed type effect and it stands on top rather than blending in.
The kick sounds nice. In fact, kinda how I would like mine to sound, but maybe it could be dialed down a bit. As Charles said (Welcome to the site Charles), the bass could be more prominent.
All in all, a really good song. It's got that Fountain of Wayne thing going on.... see what I did there?? lmao.
Dig the guitar solo, btw.