Hi - the concept of this song (and one of the possible titles) is one of these: "Please Stop By" and / or "You Can Always Be With Me.." Telling someone that when things are tough, and not going right,,etc,,,they can come and be with me,,,,and just stop by anytime.... My stuck point is on the Chorus. Here is a sample verse:
When you're driving in the city streets today
And you think of a direction, and there's no one else that way...
3 sample choruses I have toyed with:
1. You can come and be with me
just any time of day or night....just be with me
2. Would you please stop by
any time of day, don't be afraid,,,,please stop by
3 (the much longer chorus) -
You know I'll be there for you
To help deal with the crazy world
So just close your eyes and count to 3
Then come and just Be With Me......
Any ideas !?!? Fire away Thanks
When you're driving in the city streets today
And you think of a direction, and there's no one else that way...
3 sample choruses I have toyed with:
1. You can come and be with me
just any time of day or night....just be with me
2. Would you please stop by
any time of day, don't be afraid,,,,please stop by
3 (the much longer chorus) -
You know I'll be there for you
To help deal with the crazy world
So just close your eyes and count to 3
Then come and just Be With Me......
Any ideas !?!? Fire away Thanks
