prestomation
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Hey everybody, i haven't posted anything here in forever. This is one I've been working on for a while. It is a dark, dreary, piano driven piece about letting go..or something like that. I think I'm gonna expand the last verse a little to make it kinda like a bridge, but I may not. Anyway, I'd love to hear what you guys think. And I really don't have a title for sure yet.
V1
The sun will set and the moon will rise
the sky will darken as you realize
the thunder and the lightning, come to say goodbye
they come to tell me, it's all been a lie
V2
The rain it comes to soothe my pain
it comes to tell me you're to blame
I really should have listened when it woke me up that night
now I'm waiting for tomorrow, dreaming of second light
Chorus:
Please say what you mean, please mean what you say
I never believed you
I'm tired of this, I'm tired of you
I wish my dreams would just come true
V3
The moon will set and the sun will rise
I see you now with brand new eyes
The sun shines light upon me, allowing me to see
Now I'm severing the connection, between you and me
Chorus
V4
The orange, the red, the blue, and the gray
All proclaim the brand new day
The moon and the stars stay to remind us
Of all the days we leave behind us
V1
The sun will set and the moon will rise
the sky will darken as you realize
the thunder and the lightning, come to say goodbye
they come to tell me, it's all been a lie
V2
The rain it comes to soothe my pain
it comes to tell me you're to blame
I really should have listened when it woke me up that night
now I'm waiting for tomorrow, dreaming of second light
Chorus:
Please say what you mean, please mean what you say
I never believed you
I'm tired of this, I'm tired of you
I wish my dreams would just come true
V3
The moon will set and the sun will rise
I see you now with brand new eyes
The sun shines light upon me, allowing me to see
Now I'm severing the connection, between you and me
Chorus
V4
The orange, the red, the blue, and the gray
All proclaim the brand new day
The moon and the stars stay to remind us
Of all the days we leave behind us