First try at a Christmas song...

lesterpaul

lesterpaul

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no music to upload yet ...here are the lyrics...admittedly i think they may need tying together a lil better but ahh never have done this so i'll see what ya'll think ....beware it may be a lil sappy for some...you were forwarned...lol

christmas point of view
words by Bill E.

early christmas morning
presents round the tree
kids rush in open them
o what a sight to see
this ol world is cold outside
but it warms up at christmas time

chorus:
i wish i had a kids
christmas point of view
where nothing really matters
cept getting out of school
the love of a family at christmas time
can chase away all the worries from your mind

wrapping paper all around
toys here and there
i'll watch the bills come rollin in
right now i just don't care
cost of a gift for the price of a smile
keeps the world outside for a lil while

chorus:
i wish i had a kids
christmas point of view
where nothing really matters
cept getting out of school
the love of a family at christmas time
can chase away all the worries from your mind



cousin Dave he called us
out on the desert sand
to wish us merry Christmas
from a foriegn land
there was a prayer in all our hearts
let this be the last Christmas apart

alt chorus:
i'd like to thank him for his soldiers
christmas point of view
they're giving up their christmas
protecting me and you
 
Since English isn't my language I cannot give you a correct feedback. But from what I see it might work. It's heavily dependent upon the arrangement and the tune though
 
Emusic said:
Since English isn't my language I cannot give you a correct feedback. But from what I see it might work. It's heavily dependent upon the arrangement and the tune though
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thanks ...th tune is a slow one with with the last 2 lines of the verses going to a minor chord ...thanks again for the input
 
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