Love guitars. Sounds similar in tone to Be'Lakor. The cymbals on the fast part towards middle of the song are distracting to me. Just sounds like a wash of noise. Otherwise it's nice sounding.
Great!!! Excellent riffs I must say, really great. This is not your first metal song though, perhaps the first one you've recorded, but no one writes a great song like this as a first song
Some nitpicking:
* no bass?
* the guitars should be a tad bit beefier (not much though!) and louder
* sometimes the playing is not 100% accurately tight, and that's a must for metal.