I dont like the sound of the toms but that is probably what they sound like in real life.
Actually, were they mic'd from the inside? Or did you just use overheads.
Its quite good for a 1st attempt. You havnt over panned it which is a common mistake when people 1st start out. Try with lots of differnt placements and try and memorise each detail about them, or just record all the differnt placements.
cheers