Hello, Ehgor1978, I believe it was, After hearing the Youtube recording, I second one person's earlier comment that more separation is desirable.; also, my impression is that the acoustic track is being "overshadowed" to a notable extent by the electric guitar and other instruments. Then, too, another question occurred to me from a purely musical standpoint: Where is the song "going" in terms of the melody or theme your recording seeks to develop? What came across to me as I listened both through headphones, then through a fairly good stereo speaker, was many repetitions of a chord pattern "G-major, D-Major, E-Minor, using the traditional open guitar chords. Somewhere somewhat in the background, I heard an ongoing track of notes which might have been a melody or a counterpart, but which I could not hear very well. I suppose that my fundamental question is "what is the underlying theme or "objective" you want to transmit to your listener?
But don't get me wrong here. I applaud you for posting your first acoustic recording here on MP3 Mixing Clinic. If I correcty understand the purpose of this section of the forums, it is intended as a learning environment in which each of us who want to improve our grasp of the art and/or science of better MP3 mixing can provide works to which others can listen and respons. Admittedly, I come primarily from a background of classical music, especially Baroque and pipe organ; but I have done my share of 50s and 60s country and rock home recordings with great fun doing them. Perhaps you were intending to create something which rather rambles along on a sort of four-bar loop; and if that is your intention, I believe you did it. But if the "background notes" I heard should have more prominence, you might want to adjust your mix a bit to carry out that purpose.
When I find out a bit more about how MP3 Mixing Clinic operates, I plan to put up a few of my recordings from time to time. Being totally blind, however, I don't have any way to add videos to my recordings. They are actually wave files on my hard drive, but they also exist as MP3 files.