Hi. I'm looking for feedback on an original song I just finished. It's a solo project, so everything you hear is me. I welcome comments and suggestions on anything: Song writing, arrangement, performance, mixing. I take criticism well.
Here are the lyrics. Thanks!
Crop Circles
Words and Music by Ray Taylor, 2015
Into the heart of stone
There's a stone left to turn
No laws tonight
Passion sparks and burns
All very simple things
From the natural springs
These fields are dark and wide
Draw us to the other side
Touch and fall entwined
We are young
We are young
Across the sky
The speed of light
A spark lights up the land
And falls upon the planet face
And everywhere a trace
On every field and every face
A design
And the seed you carry now
Yours and mine
And the skill of my hands
The work of my mind
The skipping heart
A smile
These things belong to you
While I am
And maybe we are
And maybe we will be
Our destiny
Into these fields
Trampled down by frost
We watch the sky with every lover's eye
This child we made, a thought engraved
Into the great design
And for all the world, a sign
We were here
We were here
Here are the lyrics. Thanks!
Crop Circles
Words and Music by Ray Taylor, 2015
Into the heart of stone
There's a stone left to turn
No laws tonight
Passion sparks and burns
All very simple things
From the natural springs
These fields are dark and wide
Draw us to the other side
Touch and fall entwined
We are young
We are young
Across the sky
The speed of light
A spark lights up the land
And falls upon the planet face
And everywhere a trace
On every field and every face
A design
And the seed you carry now
Yours and mine
And the skill of my hands
The work of my mind
The skipping heart
A smile
These things belong to you
While I am
And maybe we are
And maybe we will be
Our destiny
Into these fields
Trampled down by frost
We watch the sky with every lover's eye
This child we made, a thought engraved
Into the great design
And for all the world, a sign
We were here
We were here
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