Feedback needed.

[ds21]

Let me know where you think I need improvement, especially the lower end, I need bigger monitors, when you critique let me know what monitors your using please.

Thanks!

Vox -> SP C1 (I need some better vocal mics)
Guitar -> Rode nt5's (kind of dark sounding)
Drums -> really cheap drum machine, Not mine. (I need to replace those, drum agog)

 

[xfinsterx]

Sounds ok to me as far as the bass in concerned.
Im listening on Sony hi-fi's.
That singer bugs though.
A little more reverb would be nice on the guitars and vox.

 

[lykwydchykyn]

If it were me, I'd nix the drum machine and if anything put in some nice aux percussion, or something that's more of an obvious "drum loop" (not trying to sound real).

I'd also compress the vocals a bit and add a touch of plate-type reverb. This track would sound killer with some mandolin, too; know any mandolin players?

Just my opinions

 

[ds21]

Ok I'll try some more reverb and some more compression (I've allready have more agressive compression on here than anyone I recorded before), her vocals are really hard to record, doesn't know how to work the mic and her enunciation and emphasis not only on a group of words but within individual word is strong, and of course I tell her to smooth it out but thats like having someone get rid of an accent in a couple minutes.

Thanks guys.