joejohnstun
New member
High! This is my sixth HomeRecording song (you can listen to the others here: Being Single, Cappuccino Monday, Psychosis, If I Had a Pair of You, and When You're Bad)
This song tones down the manic delirium just a touch to venture into some melodramatic, moonlit territory. Romance - an area in which I generally don't do well.
What do you think - too boring, too breathy, too lengthy, too incomprehensibly flowery?
Thank you!
https://soundcloud.com/joejohnstun/fall-fall
Fall, Fall
When you laugh, love, morning comes out
To watch your eyes shine, sparkle and dance.
When you sing, love, angels are holding their breath.
When you dream, love, I kiss your eyes
With a new world, a sunflower sky.
When you're sad, love, I paint the rainbow for you.
If you cry, love, give me your tears.
If you walk away I will be there.
If you fall,
Fall into my arms.
When we kiss, love, I can make you
Forget all else. Lost here in the magic
We make love. I could move mountains for you.
If you hurt, love, give me your pain.
If you walk away I will be there.
If you fall,
Darling,
Fall into my arms.
This song tones down the manic delirium just a touch to venture into some melodramatic, moonlit territory. Romance - an area in which I generally don't do well.
What do you think - too boring, too breathy, too lengthy, too incomprehensibly flowery?
Thank you!
https://soundcloud.com/joejohnstun/fall-fall
Fall, Fall
When you laugh, love, morning comes out
To watch your eyes shine, sparkle and dance.
When you sing, love, angels are holding their breath.
When you dream, love, I kiss your eyes
With a new world, a sunflower sky.
When you're sad, love, I paint the rainbow for you.
If you cry, love, give me your tears.
If you walk away I will be there.
If you fall,
Fall into my arms.
When we kiss, love, I can make you
Forget all else. Lost here in the magic
We make love. I could move mountains for you.
If you hurt, love, give me your pain.
If you walk away I will be there.
If you fall,
Darling,
Fall into my arms.