rayc
retroreprobate
Written by rayc & supercreep
The 1st link is to a recent & early mix of a track I've been doodling with since January. This mix has nothing on the master buss - no EQ, reverb or limiting so you're able to get a good naked idea of the raw mix.
The 2nd link is the same mix with a little reverb, compression ^ a limiter on the master buss.
Supercreep put his hand up to do the vocals - he dug even deeper: tweaking the lyric and vastly improving the melody. Thanks Casey.
This isn't complete as the drums are still canned but I'd like to know how you folk think the vocals are sitting.
Lyrics:
Got my knapsack packed
No oversight
It’s not for staying
Overnight
Scar crossed lovers
A bloodletting rite
Chorus
Steady recall
Every word
Each a bullet
Hit when heard
Take exception
She’s taking notes
The even footsteps
Every steady breath
The faint aroma
Of crystal meth
The tattooed patterns
Every line a death
Chorus
Scar crossed lovers
In bedrooms dark
Each search reaction
Each leaves a mark
He’s keeping tally
When it’s all she wrote
written by ray & casey
A little, interim, tweak given that Casey is interested in re doing the vox and that real drums are likely to eventuate.
I've use some EQ on the stereo drums to get a little more snare and pulled the guitars down a little bit to allow the vocal some more space.
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