Evaluate my 1st posted track

[L'espion Noir]

i need feedback on my 1st track at the mp3 clinic forum https://homerecording.com/bbs/showthread.php?p=1382313#post1382313

thanks

 

[Trumpspade]

Nice piece to listen to
EXCEPT..............
The Kick in certain parts of the song is a tad bit off, it's like a little hesitation then in pops back in the groove. That is at least what I can hear! Other than that, I think it's a nice melody with a sweet blend of sounds.

 

[L'espion Noir]

Nice piece to listen to
EXCEPT..............
The Kick in certain parts of the song is a tad bit off, it's like a little hesitation .

thanks for listening
perhaps a bit of quantisation ( i should make a point of using often) will do the trick

 

[Trumpspade]

It would be interesting to see others comment because overall I think it is pretty good, especially for your 1st.
Continue to take criticism in a positive sense. Some people post and ask for others comments and their feeling get hurt easily. Keep on Keeping on.................

 

[matic]

WEll, its not god and its not bad its off beat alot and maybe Quantization will help. but it sounds like you programed the beat off beat and that makes the whole song sound off but keep it up!

 

[L'espion Noir]

thanks for the pointers guys
and please keep it coming