End Of You!

COOL TUNE DUDE!

COOL STUFF AND ALL, BUT IT'S NOT LOUD ANOUGH! TURN UP THE
GUITARS,DRUMS AND VOCAL. THE BASS SOUNDS OK THOUGH YOU MAY WON'T TO BRING IT UP JUST A BIT TO.

BY THE WAY... WHAT RECORDING SYSTEM DID YOU USE
ON THAT SONG ANYWAY?
 
Hey,

I dug the guitar tone on this tune. It was very fitting. Nice vox.
simple enough tune but, well arranged and tracked.

Nice job.

Theron.
 
i think it sounds real good. But, there a slight feeling of emptiness tho...dunno how to describe it. Maybe some padding with strings??? I am not sure

Well done overall

AL
 
thanks guys.

I recorded it with a Delta 44 into Cakewalk Pro Audio 9.
Maybe some keys would be nice....
 
I mistakenly downloaded "Who are you" first. So I listened to two songs.

On Who... Maybe a little more compressing on the lead guitar. It came through a little strong at times - but only a little. I liked the change at about :52. Nice guitar playing. I found it a little tough to stay interested for the full 4 minutes - maybe introduce some instruments in the middle to break things up.

On End... Quite a different song huh? I love this one. Great chord progression. Easy to listen to. Great guitar parts, and great tone. Perfect use for the song. Exceptional tone on the lead guit.

A vocal issue at :41 on the "ooos". I think there was a vocal pop at :46. More liberal use of harmonies would help too. I think a bit reverb on the vocals would be sweet. I liked the little flanger-type effect near the end
 
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