Turkeyoverlord
New member
Hi guys,
This is my latest little ditty if you can call it that. I did all the guitar and bass and programmed the drums and midi bits (I'm no drummer so not entirely happy with them yet).
It's a first draught so really I want feedback on every aspect but namely the following:
- Composition wise does it seem out at all or alright? I'm used to composing rock songs and have a good grasp of that but this one is a bit more epic and I'm not sure if I could have built it up in a more interesting way or even if the heavy bit fits very well. I quite like it now but then I've listened to it quite a few times. Would be interesting to have a first listen perspective on it.
- The mix overall. What needs changing. I like the heavy drum reverb for this song but maybe it's lacking clarity? Not sure..
- Do you think I should keep it instrumental or have some female vocals going on? In my minds eye it should have some powerful female vocals including a certain amount of wailing at various points. Thoughts? Are any of you a female vocalist who can wail over this?
Any other comments not related also welcome.
First mix
View attachment EndOfConcrete (1).mp3
Second mix
View attachment EndOfConcrete_Try2.mp3
This is my latest little ditty if you can call it that. I did all the guitar and bass and programmed the drums and midi bits (I'm no drummer so not entirely happy with them yet).
It's a first draught so really I want feedback on every aspect but namely the following:
- Composition wise does it seem out at all or alright? I'm used to composing rock songs and have a good grasp of that but this one is a bit more epic and I'm not sure if I could have built it up in a more interesting way or even if the heavy bit fits very well. I quite like it now but then I've listened to it quite a few times. Would be interesting to have a first listen perspective on it.
- The mix overall. What needs changing. I like the heavy drum reverb for this song but maybe it's lacking clarity? Not sure..
- Do you think I should keep it instrumental or have some female vocals going on? In my minds eye it should have some powerful female vocals including a certain amount of wailing at various points. Thoughts? Are any of you a female vocalist who can wail over this?
Any other comments not related also welcome.
First mix
View attachment EndOfConcrete (1).mp3
Second mix
View attachment EndOfConcrete_Try2.mp3
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