I wrote this song a few months back and have been slightly tweaking the lyrics. This song is in 6:8 and you could compare the music and mood to cross of Hawthorne Heights and 30 Seconds to Mars. The last 2 lines of the second verse are actual lyrics to a song me and this girl would sing to each other; So Contagious by Acceptance. I put the lyrics in the song because they were the topic of the second verse and I felt they flowed well. Is it lame to purposefully use other song'slyrics in context to tell a specific story? Tell me what you think.
The Promise
You said that you loved me, you never would leave me like this
Now you've broken the promise, a promise I'll never forget
The taste of you is on my lips leading back to our first kiss
Without you here by my side life seems to fake to live
Those words you said burned a hole into my heart
The place where you should be, you're leaving me empty
Every line to every song leaves me missing you
I stop and try to sing along, these words I scream are far from true
"and could this be out of line to say you're the only one
Breaking me down, you're breaking me down like this"
Those words you said burned a hole in to my heart
The place where you should be, you're leaving me empty
The lie is on your face, a smile even you couldn't fake
I hope you think of me constantly
I'll never forget the nights that we had spent
Our hands clasped so tight and we were willing to fight
For our love
Those words you said burned a hole in to my heart
The place where you should be, you're leaving me empty
The lie is on your face, a smile even you couldn't fake
I hope you think of me constantly
The Promise
You said that you loved me, you never would leave me like this
Now you've broken the promise, a promise I'll never forget
The taste of you is on my lips leading back to our first kiss
Without you here by my side life seems to fake to live
Those words you said burned a hole into my heart
The place where you should be, you're leaving me empty
Every line to every song leaves me missing you
I stop and try to sing along, these words I scream are far from true
"and could this be out of line to say you're the only one
Breaking me down, you're breaking me down like this"
Those words you said burned a hole in to my heart
The place where you should be, you're leaving me empty
The lie is on your face, a smile even you couldn't fake
I hope you think of me constantly
I'll never forget the nights that we had spent
Our hands clasped so tight and we were willing to fight
For our love
Those words you said burned a hole in to my heart
The place where you should be, you're leaving me empty
The lie is on your face, a smile even you couldn't fake
I hope you think of me constantly