DogmaticVox
Meh...
Hey guys, I just finished this track last night got a 1st draft mix. Let me know what you think.
Hey Gerry. Cool tune. I dig the style. Reminds me of some old Jawbreaker tune. Sort of. The overall vibe is there. I love that stuff.
The only thing i might personally do different is bring the drums up a little overall in the mix and let them drive the guitars. The guitars, although really well mixed and full sounding, Are dominating the track a bit more then they should, even for a guitar driven song.
The back up vocals are great i like that sound!
Sounds a little Like PAW from the late 90's - around Jessie.
The kick is missing and I'm not sure I'm too keen on the Bvox.
I like the vocal level as is or even a little lower.
Just a touch more definition on the bass'd be nice.
Otherwise not bad at all.
I was listening to Coheed and Cambria before I pulled up your song, and I've gotta say, this holds its own, man. Great sounding full guitars, and your drum kit sounds good, too (albeit a bit low in the mix, but not by much). What reverb are you putting on it? I like the dry-ish, but not too dry sound you've got going.
Sounds great, man.
Alright guys, here's an updated mix with the drums bumped up a bit. You kick shouldn't be non-existent anymore.