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[Wazn]

First Mix. New to the game...

How does this sound...

For the vox what needs to be done?

http://www.sendspace.com/file/72tyum

 

[blkdog7]

I love this!! Great work, man. I think the vocals are good. Everything is where it's supposed to be. The mix overall sounds a little lo-fi but it kind of works for it. I think you did a good job. Love the white boy rappin'. Good stuff, nice work!