Hey,
I was going for sort of a John Prine thing here... mostly interested in comments regarding vocal performance and vocal level in the mix. Also does the overall arrangement work for you?
You can mention other things, too, of course.....
The link below will take you to the music page on my site. From there you can download the song (third down in the right column) or stream it by clicking the little play button.
Peace and love!
C
Colfax Ave
colfax avenue
the single file line
gotta room with a view of tomorrow
but how do you tell the window
from the mirror on the wall
it's a two-way street
but there's only one way to fall
and i took a mean spill
right in to the land fill
with all the other white trash dudes
with the tumbleweeds on colfax avenue
the cold hard facts of life
seventeen miles long
shuckin' my honky jive on the corner
drllin' down to the joke inside
a laugh from yesterday
it's a two-way street, man
you gotta go your own way
and i took a mean spill
right in to the land fill
with all the other white trash dudes
with the tumbleweeds on colfax avenue
i've felt the wind blow in a million
different ways at once
time is capable of pulling off
some awful stunts
like a starbucks opening up
yeah, but you can tell by the roof
that place used to be a pizza hut in a past life
and there's a little of me scattered all around
the salvage yard out back
it's a two-way street
a big swap meet on colfax
and i took a mean spill
right in to the land fill
with all the other white trash dudes
with the tumbleweeds on colfax avenue
I was going for sort of a John Prine thing here... mostly interested in comments regarding vocal performance and vocal level in the mix. Also does the overall arrangement work for you?
You can mention other things, too, of course.....
The link below will take you to the music page on my site. From there you can download the song (third down in the right column) or stream it by clicking the little play button.
Peace and love!
C
Colfax Ave
colfax avenue
the single file line
gotta room with a view of tomorrow
but how do you tell the window
from the mirror on the wall
it's a two-way street
but there's only one way to fall
and i took a mean spill
right in to the land fill
with all the other white trash dudes
with the tumbleweeds on colfax avenue
the cold hard facts of life
seventeen miles long
shuckin' my honky jive on the corner
drllin' down to the joke inside
a laugh from yesterday
it's a two-way street, man
you gotta go your own way
and i took a mean spill
right in to the land fill
with all the other white trash dudes
with the tumbleweeds on colfax avenue
i've felt the wind blow in a million
different ways at once
time is capable of pulling off
some awful stunts
like a starbucks opening up
yeah, but you can tell by the roof
that place used to be a pizza hut in a past life
and there's a little of me scattered all around
the salvage yard out back
it's a two-way street
a big swap meet on colfax
and i took a mean spill
right in to the land fill
with all the other white trash dudes
with the tumbleweeds on colfax avenue
