This track breathes the punk-rock spirit from the 70ies and mixes it with a bit of Franz Ferdinand. That´s the kind of music only english people can make...and I love it. The vocals are great too...they remind me of Jamie T. There are two things that could be improved though (imho):
1. The refrain isn´t as good as the rest of the song...it slows the track down a bit.
2. The drums could be a bit more aggressive. Especially the base-drum sounds a bit weak. If you want to make the track danceable it should have a little bit more oomph.
Hammer
Sounds like the Arctic Monkeys meets Richard Hell all doing On Broadway.
I'd veer a little away from that vocal style/phrasing - you'll get comments about being derivitive non stop and your words/melodies deserve to stand alone.
The song & playing a pretty good. It has a nice Wire meets Mark E Smith rant to it.
Sounds well recorded - nice sound to the high hats and bass in particular.
Minimalist sounds with some good rhythms.
It does sound a tad too close to the A Monkeys though.