Irwin abrigo
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I'll appreciate comments and suggestions on my song below..
Carry on by irwin abrigo | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Carry on by irwin abrigo | Free Listening on SoundCloud
I really like the chord progression and sense of melody. Has a soulful groove. Are you going tondevelope it a bit more and add a lyric?
Good melodies and ideas, but needs more to the story. Some sparse songs are still great, if is has a good arc.
I like the idea behind this song. In my opinion it sounds like the beginning of a good track but its just stays at the beginning without really progressing. But I'm sure if you edit it and take everyone's criticism (or don't take), you'll make a more complete track