Can't Give

[formant74]

Here's a song I started in early '06 while deployed to Iraq. When I got home I was sent to another post and deployed again so I wasn't able to finish. There are no vocals yet, plus I haven't completed lyrics either.
I was working on it a few months ago with what I had taken to Iraq with me.
I need some feedback on it. I know I'm not the greatest guitar player but I did what I could.

http://www.acidplanet.com/components/embedfile.asp?asset=1128410&T=591

 

[RAMI]

I'm trying to listen, but it's telling me I have to log in. Am I doing something wrong??? I'm not going to register on a site just to listen to something.

 

[formant74]

Sorry about that.

They must have changed the play option.
You can check it out on www.myspace.com/formantshift just click on the song Can't Give. It's the first one on the player. I just didn't like it on there cause of the way mp3's sound. I prefer Windows Media.