I started listening, realized I had to get laundry started, noted the John Bon Jovi -esque vocals and the straight rock feel. Headed back up 4 minutes later to Dave Bowie /ziggy -esque rock and had to check to be sure someone didn't hijack windows media player on me whi9le I was gone.
Good stuff, the recording isn't technically 'great' by today's standards, but it is good and considering the type of retro sound you're getting musically you probably want it sounding exactly as it is.
The acostic plucking / strumming and the sound of the pick doesn't fit at 7:40-8:10. I thought my playback was clipping in some way, but I think it was an acoustic guitar (?). Seems out of place.
Probably one of more original sounding rock-rooted stuff I've heard in a while.
2 big thumbs up. You rekindled some ideas I've been meaning to incorporate and I think the song I wrote last week could use some of the psychedelic touches you masterfully demonstrated here.