'Bye Bye' (Seether meets Staind) Need Feedback on the concept of this song

dreamsound2

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MODERATOR: Not sure how this post got repeated. Everyone else, the correct version with the right link is here: https://homerecording.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=288439



I'm doing a bit of an experiment here. I made a pre-production of a song at home and for the first time I'm taking it to a studio.

So this version was not meant to be heard by anyone and I feel like I'm posting naked pictures of myself here lol. But, I really just want to know if this song was done 'right' (vocals in tune, correcting the phrasing, throwing some harmonies, done in a good sounding room) would this be something you would listen to or does this suck? :confused:

http://adam-lambert.org/mp3/9 Bye Bye Vocal Preproduction.mp3

Also, I can't change too much the format of the song now but any comments like adding a guitar solo, a change in the lyrics, or any type of effect that you think it might work for the studio version, feel free to share.

Since I'm not much of a drummer (probably shows in this song) I already had a session drummer do some acoustic drums for me in a good room and they're sounding pretty good :D

Thanks again for lending me your ears.

The song should be done in two more weeks, I'll be sure to post it back so everyone interested can download the final studio version.
 
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