dreamsound2
New member
I'm doing a bit of an experiment here. I made a pre-production of a song at home and for the first time I'm taking it to a studio.
So this version was not meant to be heard by anyone and I feel like I'm posting naked pictures of myself here lol. But, I really just want to know if this song was done 'right' (vocals in tune, correcting the phrasing, throwing some harmonies, done in a good sounding room) would this be something you would listen to or does this suck?
Also, I can't change too much the format of the song now but any comments like adding a guitar solo, a change in the lyrics, or any type of effect that you think it might work for the studio version, feel free to share.
Since I'm not much of a drummer (probably shows in this song) I already had a session drummer do some acoustic drums for me in a good room and they're sounding pretty good
Thanks again for lending me your ears.
The song should be done in two more weeks, I'll be sure to post it back so everyone interested can download the final studio version.
Lyrics:
Bye-Bye
--------
Once again I have to leave
The people that I love
In the quest for my imaginary world
Once again I have to feel
Like I am all alone
and myself the only person I know
Bye bye
It is time to let go
I am en route to find something new
Bye bye
It is time to let go
I won't be that far from you
Complicated
Destination
No one knows who I was before
Are the reasons I escape
in search for the truth
or am I really looking for an excuse
to start over
and somehow
erase my mistakes
and forgive myself for what I've done here
Bye bye
It is time to let go
...
So this version was not meant to be heard by anyone and I feel like I'm posting naked pictures of myself here lol. But, I really just want to know if this song was done 'right' (vocals in tune, correcting the phrasing, throwing some harmonies, done in a good sounding room) would this be something you would listen to or does this suck?
Also, I can't change too much the format of the song now but any comments like adding a guitar solo, a change in the lyrics, or any type of effect that you think it might work for the studio version, feel free to share.
Since I'm not much of a drummer (probably shows in this song) I already had a session drummer do some acoustic drums for me in a good room and they're sounding pretty good
Thanks again for lending me your ears.
The song should be done in two more weeks, I'll be sure to post it back so everyone interested can download the final studio version.
Lyrics:
Bye-Bye
--------
Once again I have to leave
The people that I love
In the quest for my imaginary world
Once again I have to feel
Like I am all alone
and myself the only person I know
Bye bye
It is time to let go
I am en route to find something new
Bye bye
It is time to let go
I won't be that far from you
Complicated
Destination
No one knows who I was before
Are the reasons I escape
in search for the truth
or am I really looking for an excuse
to start over
and somehow
erase my mistakes
and forgive myself for what I've done here
Bye bye
It is time to let go
...