Bus Stop, lots of guitar

[paulisher]

This is a mix in progress for your critique. It feels a little disjointed to me in parts and I know it's long. This was mixed in the box and I'm wondering if anyone has advice on some summing mixers??:
Here is a new mix based on some previous comments.
https://soundcloud.com/user72650099/bus-stop-3-asio-universal

 

[dobro]

Dunno bout summing mixers, but the vocal sounds like it needs less low mid and more high end. It sounds sorta muffled. I want that vocal to just jump out. It's probably the star of the show in this mix, but I'm having a hard time making out lyrics. Shouldn't be that way.

Exquisite arrangement, wonderful playing. How come the vocal's so buried?

 

[SaraphTravis]

Very cool song with some great performances. The vocals might benefit from some tweaking; I want it to sound more "alive". As far as long songs go, this is nothing. I'm a guitar player, though so the licks throughout might keep me interested more than others.

 

[paulisher]

Thanks guys I will work on the vocal. It got left behind as I added guitar tracks.

 

[mcmd]

Great composition....great execution....great guitar tone! Mix sounds fine to me...