@vomithatsteve; whoops! i forgot about the character limit, that's pretty funny! thanks for your feedback, though. I will try to revisit the delivery. I think I need a vocal coach for some guidance though, maybe as a guide track, to help get me where I need to be since I'm so green with singing, and about every other aspect of music. When you referred to the writing, and the melody being repetitive, was that the lyrics that you were referring to, or did you mean the actual music? I am also new to writing music, and playing, and cubase, and- you get the idea. For now all I really can get into is making some loops with very limited changes. I need some more experience trying to work in breaks and a bunch of other changes that will make the music more lively and invigorating, instead of so repetitive. I try to make unique loops or sections to give me some basic foundation to use as inspiration for lyrics/singing...anyway, thanks again for your input!
@JDOD, thanks for taking the time to listen and provide some feedback! It is nice to hear some encouragement. I know I am still a terrible little newb, but I am trying so hard. Every ounce of critique helps! And, every ounce of positive feedback is very motivational, it keeps me from throwing in the towel. The lyrics were centered around the film, from the perspective of a replicant. I tend to hear that a lot of the music I "compose" or produce (if I dare call it that) tends to have a more 80's club feel, that is probably unintentional and just a subconscious thing.... Pretty funny to hear that over and over. How do I modernize! haha. Thanks again!
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