Enchilada
Strange person.
Been a while, here's a song I'm in the middle of writing
Hey all,
Its been a while since I've posted on these forums. Got a song I'm writing at the moment and I'm interested to see how much you guys can tear it to pieces.
This is a hip-hop song so the lyrics will be rapped and one thing you'll have to remember is that I'm Australian so some things that rhyme in my accent may not rhyme in the American accent so, yeah here's my verse so far:
Sometimes I think that the past had it in for me
A dark shadowed history, can't fathom mysteries
A single flower blooms in a drought stricken plain
Without a little rain, it’s bound to wither, fade
If a storm is welcomed with all of its might
Before the last petal falls it drinks the water of life
But even inside a metal cage we're never safe
Every single variable demonstrates a weather change
Lost in perplexity effortlessly in murder scenes
The only certainty is the uncertainty of earthly beings
Day to day, week to week, month to month I'm craftily
Enticed by the things that always destroy a part of me
Comradery lit the way like a lantern it was a grand turn
The day a man learnt he can stand firm
The scene's red not wearing black. You're staring at.
Another life form in the desolate track that's grown its petals back
Cheers!
Ench
Hey all,
Its been a while since I've posted on these forums. Got a song I'm writing at the moment and I'm interested to see how much you guys can tear it to pieces.
This is a hip-hop song so the lyrics will be rapped and one thing you'll have to remember is that I'm Australian so some things that rhyme in my accent may not rhyme in the American accent so, yeah here's my verse so far:
Sometimes I think that the past had it in for me
A dark shadowed history, can't fathom mysteries
A single flower blooms in a drought stricken plain
Without a little rain, it’s bound to wither, fade
If a storm is welcomed with all of its might
Before the last petal falls it drinks the water of life
But even inside a metal cage we're never safe
Every single variable demonstrates a weather change
Lost in perplexity effortlessly in murder scenes
The only certainty is the uncertainty of earthly beings
Day to day, week to week, month to month I'm craftily
Enticed by the things that always destroy a part of me
Comradery lit the way like a lantern it was a grand turn
The day a man learnt he can stand firm
The scene's red not wearing black. You're staring at.
Another life form in the desolate track that's grown its petals back
Cheers!
Ench
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