dafduc
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This is the same song you guys helped me with, and crawdad covered. This time it's got a Nashville-style arrangement. I hope I'm pretty close to a finished product this time.
This is all me, so the vocals won't be in the same league as Al's - but there's a big wide singer/songwriter-with-quirky-voice scene out there. This is a final version of the lyrics, which were stilll fluxing when Al and I did our last versions.
Seriously, I'm hoping this'll be good enough to help me pitch the tune to somebody in Nashville.
Bass, piano, and strings are me on various VSTis, the rest (guitar, mando, pedal steel) are loops.
This is essentially the same version I handed out at jamfest, plus verb and autotune on the vocs, and a few level fixes.
Here are some specifics I need feedback on:
I liked the vocal EQ when it was dry, but then I added verb and now I have sibilance. Is the sibilance bothering anybody else? Best way to remove / reduce it? I have some frequency charts, but advice is definitely appreciated.
There are some late hits on piano - I left them for a human feel thing, but a couple, especially one at the beginning of a verse, are pretty noticeable. Should I tweak those?
The fade-in bass note at the beginning isn't really working for me, but without the fade it sounded worse. Suggestions?
Left the drums out - do I need 'em? The guitar track really propels it adequately, ISTM. Your thoughts?
Thanks to all of you, especially Al, for your input last time around.
Daf
This is the same song you guys helped me with, and crawdad covered. This time it's got a Nashville-style arrangement. I hope I'm pretty close to a finished product this time.
This is all me, so the vocals won't be in the same league as Al's - but there's a big wide singer/songwriter-with-quirky-voice scene out there. This is a final version of the lyrics, which were stilll fluxing when Al and I did our last versions.
Seriously, I'm hoping this'll be good enough to help me pitch the tune to somebody in Nashville.
Bass, piano, and strings are me on various VSTis, the rest (guitar, mando, pedal steel) are loops.
This is essentially the same version I handed out at jamfest, plus verb and autotune on the vocs, and a few level fixes.
Here are some specifics I need feedback on:
I liked the vocal EQ when it was dry, but then I added verb and now I have sibilance. Is the sibilance bothering anybody else? Best way to remove / reduce it? I have some frequency charts, but advice is definitely appreciated.
There are some late hits on piano - I left them for a human feel thing, but a couple, especially one at the beginning of a verse, are pretty noticeable. Should I tweak those?
The fade-in bass note at the beginning isn't really working for me, but without the fade it sounded worse. Suggestions?
Left the drums out - do I need 'em? The guitar track really propels it adequately, ISTM. Your thoughts?
Thanks to all of you, especially Al, for your input last time around.
Daf