The whole thing sounds very thin. Kind of like when I used to use a Walkman to record a band rehearsal. A little better than that, but kind of along those lines. The singer sounds pretty good, and I agree with Robus that her occasional pitchiness could be due to the band, which brings me to the next point. The rhythm guitar is out of tune. The lead sounds really good, though, and actually has better time than the rhythm. The sound needs to be beefier, and the band needs to gel. They don't sound comfortable together. When I play live, my adrenaline can get the best of me for a song or two until I relax and settle in. That's kind of what this sounds like. There's potential there, though.