Thanks for the comments.
Joey, you are right. I think there is too much reverb on the snare. I'll pull that down when I get a chance (might not be for a while, but I will do it). I sure do hope to put some vocals to it. Either I'm too picky, or good singers are really hard to find. Or maybe it's hard to find a good singer who is willing to put the time and effort into writing lyrics, a melody and recording just so I can show my wife that I finished a song.
Rayc and Sinman, thanks. I think I may need to turn the brass up a bit to give it a little more power when the distorted guitars come in. At the same time, I don't want the orchestra overpowering the guitars. I think I'm getting closer to getting the right balance.