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Yo I just came home and got cooking....actual food LOL...give me a few and you know I'll check it out.
 
Lyrically...dude is average. Could be better. His flow isn't fluid it's like drivin on a bumpy road...I get where he's tryin' to go with it but it's not fun watchin him try to get there. Dude sounds like he's reading and trying not to...nothing wrong with reading, but you have to convince the audience that you're not...he's not doin that.

Beat is sick, but you usually can pull off some sick shit...especially in the ethnic genre. Beat is mixed pretty damn good from where I sit.
 
Yes that is a really good mixed beat good job marg, idk if it sounded like he was reading or if he sounded like he didn't like his own voice maybe? seemed a bit stiff, that beat is dope tho
 
Yep.. sounds like he's reading..once he get over that.. he can have a banger.. nice work..
 
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