Any thoughts on this lyric?

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The Tempest
© 2004 Justin Shapcott

I
Dark clouds align on the sky-line,
But, the tempest lies in wait,
For the perfect moment,
To release his rage.

II
The fate of Man lies in his hands.
Piss him off, and start the plan...

III
A Wall Of Dust; A Pending Flood,
Now It’s Too Late To Repent,
He Will Not Relent...

IV
The fate of Man lies in his hands.
Piss him off, and start the plan...

V
The Wrath Of God...
 
Disposable said:
The Tempest
© 2004 Justin Shapcott

I
Dark clouds align on the sky-line,
But, the tempest lies in wait,
For the perfect moment,
To release his rage.

II
The fate of Man lies in his hands.
Piss him off, and start the plan...

III
A Wall Of Dust; A Pending Flood,
Now It’s Too Late To Repent,
He Will Not Relent...

IV
The fate of Man lies in his hands.
Piss him off, and start the plan...

V
The Wrath Of God...
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Well, I was interested enough to look up the word "Tempest" in the dictionary...but it only made me more confused by your "lyric." I do like the first line. the "piss him off" bit, though, is quite juvenile sounding. And the rest doesn't say much that gets me too excited...

Then I started thinking, what is a "lyric" exactly(v. "lyrics")? Is it just one word? one line?
 
Disposable said:
In my mind God is juvenile...
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-Now THAT I like. Seriously. If that's what you're getting at, don't be afraid to say it. it's got controversy, but makes you think.
 
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