Henry Duthler
New member
I wanted to get some feedback on the lyrics for one of my songs...I have the music...it's on my site, but I just don't have the singing ability to really do it justice...
Let me know what you think and any changes you would make...
here's the link to the site (For a music reference...)
http://www.betarecords.com/openframeset.php?content=/strategically.placed
The Lyrics are as follows:
Anthem To The Estranged
Lyrics written by Henry Duthler
Verse 1
I can’t avoid these feelings
So Strong I can’t ignore
To see you in such perfect light
Is more than I can afford
Beneath these shadows of my past
Lies a truth I can’t erase
Beyond this realm of reason
There comes this moment I must face
Chorus
And I fall like a sinner
Crashing to my knees
Begging for forgiveness
And praying for release
There’s a distant sound of rain
Singing an anthem to the estranged
Verse 2
Forged in Stone
Time can’t erase
Poetic verses I once knew
Their meanings lost through interpretation
Linger like a stale perfume
Memories, tarnished like copper
Worthless as they seem
So removed but still they remain
In my sleep in all my dreams
Bridge
There’s a desperate wind in the air tonight
There's a hunger in my heart
A relentless spirit in my soul tonight
And it’s slowly tearing me apart
Copyright Henry Duthler 2007
Let me know what you think and any changes you would make...
here's the link to the site (For a music reference...)
http://www.betarecords.com/openframeset.php?content=/strategically.placed
The Lyrics are as follows:
Anthem To The Estranged
Lyrics written by Henry Duthler
Verse 1
I can’t avoid these feelings
So Strong I can’t ignore
To see you in such perfect light
Is more than I can afford
Beneath these shadows of my past
Lies a truth I can’t erase
Beyond this realm of reason
There comes this moment I must face
Chorus
And I fall like a sinner
Crashing to my knees
Begging for forgiveness
And praying for release
There’s a distant sound of rain
Singing an anthem to the estranged
Verse 2
Forged in Stone
Time can’t erase
Poetic verses I once knew
Their meanings lost through interpretation
Linger like a stale perfume
Memories, tarnished like copper
Worthless as they seem
So removed but still they remain
In my sleep in all my dreams
Bridge
There’s a desperate wind in the air tonight
There's a hunger in my heart
A relentless spirit in my soul tonight
And it’s slowly tearing me apart
Copyright Henry Duthler 2007