Alt rock song-lend thy ears please

[madmax25]

A tune from my brother's band Beeftone. We're getting close to a full CD release and I'd like to get some input on what could be improved.
So aside from the amateur high school musicianship, rip away on the criticism...

lo: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=7537567&q=lo
hi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=7537567&q=hi

 

[msb3671]

Decent song, played well enough. Singer needs to emote more, IMO. Sounds tired.

I liked it. Just kinda downer, but maybe that's what you went for. I know nuttin'.

Nice work.
Matty

 

[greyharmonix]

whatever i like downers . i like this song guitars sound nice bright and clean. snare's got a good crack. my only knack and it's very minor would be the kick sound. but other than that i really enjoyed this song.