The snare sounds like a yardstick being whacked on a big wooden table in a warehouse. Maybe cut a bit of its lower end? (Or maybe consider replacing it with a great big snare sample with a great big plate reverb on it.) Also, arrangement: consider muting it altogether for a couple bars at places like 1.14 for instance, and most definitely during the a capella bit toward the end.
Careful with the 'ohs' that come in at 2.23 - they sound slightly comical.
Beautiful vocals. You just need to develop the instrumental support and mixing chops for a better presentation of the singing.
I really like this one. Nice work.
