The snare def. needs something - particularly in the intro - no POP at all. I don't that shelfing would help.
the rap does need some clarity just experiment with some EQ cuts OR cheat & use an ehancer/exciter if you end up unable to get anything happening.
Those toms are a bit bigger than the rest of the kit so don't suond realistically placed & are boomy as they are so loud.
The bas sounds ill defined during the quieter part of the fe. vox. In fact, despite being relatively sparse, that's the time the song sounds muddiest.
I really like the reggae parts - the rhythm guitar "chop" could be more pronounced.
Terrific job so far.
If you really end up at your wits end re the snare & mid mud get the song stem mastered.