i just wrote a long critique and it disappeared damn
anyway Ill try again
Mix wise I think this is a big improvement...there seems to be more room in there, the vocals are sitting better...i think a little delay (or more delay) would help even more as some of the emotional parts are a little muffled on single words (I see someone mentioned mic technique in your other thread..I think thats the problem with plosives) the piano sounds a tiny bit too loud and I may be mistaken but a couple of notes are off time..dont know if this was intentional, or if this is midi Id look at the quantization..
Guitars and drums sounded good to me for this kind of song...
Vocals sounded wrong at the end at parts...mainly the extra nasally backing, I get the sound you're going for but Im not sure you pull it off in one of the layers
Feel free to completely ignore this as its an arrangement suggestion and this is your vision...I get this is intentionally emotional but you reach that emotion way too early leaving the listener with little to get excited about...also the only main introduction after that is the piano...then a long fade out
I think you need to play it straight for longer then introduce the vocal emotion with something else backing it, another guitar part or ideally string..I think this should be all building to a crescendo then drop, the fade out end...I think at the moment its closer to one emotion all the way through
I may be totally off, im not a traditional musician, but I do know the importance of energy in my own stuff and Im sure it translates to most genres of music