a new song to share (acoustic & vocal)

danny83

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hey everyone. i just wrote a new song a few days ago and just got it recorded tonight. i feel like it's still in its early stages, so any constructive criticism anyone can give me regarding this would be awesome!

thanks in advance!

the new song is called 'chiseled in stone'

http://www.myspace.com/dannysingmeasong
 
Very nice song. The music is beautiful, with intelligent well wriiten lyrics. The recording is warm and intimate, just like it should be for a song like this.

You say it's in the early stages, so I'm curious to see where you take it. Be careful not to "muck it up"--it's quite powerful the way it is.

Great job!
 
Wow man, Wow. Just listened to all your songs. Gorgeous.

You have a great voice. As someone else stated it reminded me of Ben Gibbard.

What kind of guitar do you have? I love the tone, perfect for the type of music.

I agree with WhiteStrat as well...I like it how it is: simple, raw, emotional...I feel like if you do too much post production it'll lose the personal, sitting next to you in a room feeling. Anyway, that's just me though. Great songs, keep em coming!
 
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