A funny reggae song (dirty)

[erik_ande_85]

a while ago me and some friends recorded this, i think it turned out pretty funny. what do you guys think about it?
the singer is white trying to sound jamacian

http://www.myspace.com/thejunkshit

Brown boys - reggae cream
the bottom of the playlist.

 

[rayc]

Just for ease of the process you should put the track at the top of the list or on auto play.
The bass needs a bit of definition and centering as does the bass drum.
Otherwise OK.
I'll refrain from commenting on the lyrical bent.