Nicole_Rose
Great White North Girl
here's something i recorded recently. let me know what you think.
http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?id=13558
http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?id=13558
The chorus works better than the verse vocally - I understand the value of having both genders representing the position but the chorus vocal works better.
The intro guitar could be hotter.
I like this - the spoken part seems a little whiney in tone - the words are stronger than that & the delivery of the last few syllables bear that out.
On a thematic level the chorus & verse lash as the male voice declaims the religion and the female one the personal power politics. I'd substitute "in the name of your religion" for "your religion" as it clarifies the position.
Good song, good to have the topic treated by rock which itself has been known for abuse of power in relationships. AGITROCK lives!
thanks Rayc
no one has comments on the mix?
I've arrived late to listen. Sorry, Nicole. It's quite good. Is this a new band effort?
I left a few comments in the Songwriting Forum. I wanted to add here that the collaboration turned out well, the mix is good to my ears...
I'm really digging the guitars all over this. It's a cool-riff assault.
I don't know if I can explain this properly, but it almost seems like the male vocal part (verse?) should be a little angrier and the female voice (chorus?) can be a little less in-your-face. Maybe double the female voice part, so that it makes more of a statement. (If anyone asks, tell them the 2 parts are the girl and her mother ) But I'm the last person that should be giving advice on vocals.
if the male vocal was a bit angrier the female vocal wouldn't stand out as much i think.
thanks supercreep i think i know what you mean about the vocals. to put a point on it, they are too dramatic not enough spine in them.
Wow...
This has come a looong way from the scratch track you sent... Good job kiddo!
Your guitars are sounding incredible and I really like the overall mix
Remember us when you're famous, 'K?
I'm real late to the listening party. Typing as I listen:
I love the guitars--starting on the left then adding the right. The two guitar lines work great together.
That's your sister on the female vox? (As opposed the male vox ) Wow--can I borrow her for some work someday--love that voice.
I agree with what others have said about the spoken vocal.
Back to the guitars--nice gritty tone and great classic rock tone on the solo--nice playing on the solo too.
As far as the mix--I think you nailed the levels; everything has it's place and can be heard. I always listen for the bass on a mix--that's the hard part for lots folks (me included) but you've got it sitting just right here.
Yep, I like this one...