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    Tried to write a perfect 3 minute single but it's 3.01

    We've put together a lyric video for the song if anyone is interested:
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    Can you Hear me

    Recording is excellent, voice is fantastic, atmosphere also great - the only thing I'd like to hear is something a bit more specific or unexpected in the lyrics.
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    Green Angry Man

    Like it, spoken vocal reminds me of Tom Waits, and I do like a good gear change in a song so the change at 3.00 suits me.
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    Goose Stepping

    Can't see anything wrong with that mix, or the song. Like the lyrics and the delivery.
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    Uprising !

    Wow, that has plenty of impact! Agree the vocals are low, but to me that doesn't necessarily matter unless you want people to be able to make out the lyrics.
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    Tried to write a perfect 3 minute single but it's 3.01

    Thanks Rene, I'll have a listen to your stuff.
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    Tried to write a perfect 3 minute single but it's 3.01

    Many thanks Synth Dev - I should clarify that I have been writing songs since I was about 16, just taking it more seriously now, hence the return to this forum..
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    Tried to write a perfect 3 minute single but it's 3.01

    Thanks Mark, most of my books are for kids (if that's what you're referring to), usually humourous. Had a lot of success in the noughties, been downhill since then!
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    Song - Kicking out the days

    Don't lose that first mix! Something of the subtle ambience has been lost in the remix - as others have said, people have different tastes and expectations, no harm in putting two versions out!
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    12 years on (sorry) I do still live in Cardiff.

    12 years on (sorry) I do still live in Cardiff.
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    Tried to write a perfect 3 minute single but it's 3.01

    Hi all, it's been 12 years since I last posted but I haven't forgotten the great feedback I got here all those years ago. 67 now but having written over 60 books I've decided to give that up to perfect the craft of songwriting, now aided and abetted by my 11 year-old daughter. Recently dug out...
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    Putting wav files onto MR8

    Excuse my ignorance, but does anyone know any way of taking wav files off a PC and putting them onto an MR8? I've always done it by making a CD and recording off that, but I'm sure there's a better way.
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    David Hasselhoff came to me in a dream

    It's completely true. The Hoff bade me write him a soft rock classic which he could take to no 1 in Germany. You can hear the result at http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=518272&songID=4785505 Comments welcome, but please, no hero worship. I'm just an ordinary guy touched by our...
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    Album recorded in my kitchen on an MR8

    I've compiled an album, Closure, now available at www.soundclick.com/jonblake, very well received so far, all made on an MR8 with fairly inexpensive equipment. Be interested in views on this - I've learnt a lot as I've gone along how to get the most out of this great little box, but always...
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    Album inspired by Homerecording.com

    Hi all Been off these threads for a while - but I started putting stuff up here a couple of years ago, and largely as a result of reviews and advice I got here, persevered with a bunch of songs I wrote after a 20 year lay-off, got a no2 in the Soundclick charts and a lot of attention, as a...
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