Hey man Just gave it a listen. As VHS said, yeah the initial synths are quite harsh on the ears, literally just reducing them a touch would do the trick. As for the rest of the arrangement I really like the intricate work you did there. I agree with the fact it sounds a little over compressed, but it's not too bad at all, certainly not compared to some stuff I've heard, but I think the dynamic range should be kept within the track as it adds so much.
Overall great piece though, I like it
Those synths sound great. Love the distortion.
Guitars sound great. Great parts. Bass level was perfect.
No real complaints. Loved the lyrics.